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Last week we had to make an animation, poster or slide show about how to use commas in your writing. We had two lessons as a whole class teaching us about where commas go in sentences for different reasons, and then we had to do this create task to display our new learning. I decided to do an animation with Frances. Here's mine below.
Next time to improve on my animation I could of made it a bit more interesting.
My favourite part was looking at some cartoon streets because there was so many to choose from.
My least favourite part was adding in where the commas go because I couldn't think of a sentence.
Did you like my animation?
Konichiwa Jess
ReplyDeleteI am Eva from St Mary’s School.
I really liked your animation because I have made animations before and they are so fun to make. I have a question why did you choose the boss baby? Is it your favorite movie?
I learnt that you might like the boss baby and like animations
Maybe next time you could make the starting slides a bit more quicker
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Eva
Hi Jess, my name is ayo.
ReplyDeleteI really love your amazing animation.
This reminded me of the time I saw someone elses animation.
Maybe next time you could put in a bit more detail otherwise great blog post.
Who is your favorite animation in the animation?
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