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Wednesday, 27 May 2020

Writing

W.A.L.T upload our learning and write about it.

Yesterday we did had to do free writing and we had to look at a picture that the teacher gave us and it had a story starter for us so we had to so we had to continue the story.
Here's mine below.


"Bob tied his boat off and started to climb the cliffs. He knew that no one had lived to tell what was behind the clouds."
As bob keep climbing he notices a movement in the tree's and grass,
he ducks down and it seems to be a...
mythical creature with one big red spot on her back, three legs, one arm and one huge head
she's so cute and fluffy but deadly. Bob decides to write it to the ferocious top.
they finally get to the top "Oh no "shouts Bob it's a volcano in it's about to explode "run!"
As the lava bolts down the mountain the mythical creature which Bob name Red back she hates water but but pusses her in pushes her in and they swim to there boat, and drives off into the sunset.


Did you like my story.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jess. I really like your story. You have such a cool imagination! I like how you added to the story perfectly. Maybe next time you could go over the story and check for punctuation errors.

    What inspired you to write the story this way? Do you enjoy writing creative stories?

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